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Crying On the Inside
Contributed by
sprinter27
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Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 08:42:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The girl sheds no tears
But that doesnt mean shes not crying
On the inside she is weeping
Because she is slowly dying
No one sees her cry
Because its on the inside
She cries because its all gone
She has no one to be beside
No one to stand next to
No one for her to lean on
They all left her
Even her best friend, Jon*
Theres no shoulder to cry on
No person to talk to
She hates to admit it
But its true
She has no friends
The only thing to do is cry
But where they cant see her
So she cries on the inside
* Name changed to fit and not let people know who left her.
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Re: Crying On the Inside
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 08:55:37 PM AEST
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beautiful write..
Wishing you best of luck
keep up the great writing
~~~Michelle~~~ |
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Re: Crying On the Inside
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by Fears on
Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 09:05:26 PM AEST
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verry touching. I liked it.
KEEP WRITIN |
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Re: Crying On the Inside
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by evilfairy on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 02:40:06 AM AEST
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nice work...sad :(
i like the repetitive 'on the inside'
could be reworked as a song...has that style to it |
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Re: Crying On the Inside
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by Jaycee on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 10:12:39 PM AEST
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| a well written poem. is it too late to mend these fences? i suppose i don't know what i'm talking about, but i would rather you be smiling instead of crying. |
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