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My Song
Contributed by
blue_angel
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Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 09:14:48 PM in AEST
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This is the rhythm in which I live
This is the tempo in which I give
This is the pace in which I flow
This is the beat in which I know
This is the way I choose to be
These are the words that define me
This is the pulse that I pace to
This is the cadence my heart beats for you
These are the notes in which I dream
These are the measures in which I meet
This is the rhythm in which I belong
This is my life and this is my song
Copyright ©
blue_angel
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2005-05-22 21:14:48]
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Re: My Song
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by sprinter27 on
Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 09:24:05 PM AEST
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good poem, jennie! i like it! keep up the good writing! and keep on jumping (lol, get it?).
~sprints |
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Re: My Song
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by high_on_duct_tape on
Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 09:37:48 PM AEST
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| Amazing poem! Great idea, flawless rhymes, and perfect flow. I loved how it seemed to come straight from ur heart, it really is the song u sing |
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Re: My Song
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by MorningDove on
Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 11:06:56 PM AEST
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This is very well written. I enjoyed it immensely.
Rita |
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Re: My Song
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 06:19:54 AM AEST
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This is so beautiful...I loved the flow...
Jenni |
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Re: My Song
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by Jaycee on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 07:26:38 AM AEST
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| I really like this song, it is so upbeat and positive. I still think you should record your music and upload to your xanga! hint, hint |
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Re: My Song
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 08:42:23 AM AEST
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Great song!! It is both heartfelt and original ! I love it.
Leia |
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Re: My Song
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by sride686 on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 11:49:53 AM AEST
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A great write and it flows so well.
you always have good writes and
I truly enjoy your work. take care
and as always I'll try and find time
to read anything you write. your
friend....Steve |
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