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His Hands
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poet70
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Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 12:59:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Soft to touch
Strong grip
Smooth to feel
Strength for work
His hands, I do love.
By: Tammi Pitman
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Re: His Hands
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by MorningDove on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 01:17:18 AM AEST
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Hi Tammi;
Haiku is one of the most important form of traditional japanese poetry. Haiku is, today, a 17-syllable verse form consisting of three metrical units of 5, 7, and 5 syllables.
5 syllables
7 syllables
5 syllables
Hope this helps. : )
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Re: His Hands
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by emystar on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 01:47:08 AM AEST
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I'm not much on writing hakau but it good whatever u call it.
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emy |
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Re: His Hands
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by Sinned on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 06:41:30 AM AEST
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Poet_70
Go to poetry.com they have samples there.
Try saying the same thing in 3 lines.
Early morning sun rise
Firy orange sky
No rain on the horize
it does not have to ryme
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Re: His Hands
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by sride686 on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 12:36:27 PM AEST
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| good write and I've never tried so my hats off to you for trying. take care....Steve |
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Re: His Hands
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 09:46:10 PM AEST
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| definant improvement from this to your second attempt. |
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