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Please belong to me
Contributed by
evilfairy
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Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 02:02:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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Thoughts adrift
The mind afloat
Away, away
Swirling away
A moment in time
A moment in space
I set you free
Please belong to me
Back to the earth
The cold rushed blast
It hits hard
It is hard
Far ahead I see
Youre so far ahead of me
I close my eyes
And a part of me dies
MW 23.05.05
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evilfairy
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2005-05-23 02:02:22]
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Re: Please belong to me
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by SocialMisfit on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 02:10:27 AM AEST
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cool poem glad you re posted it.
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Re: Please belong to me
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by ForeverAlone on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 03:02:30 AM AEST
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Hmm, I like the way you did the last two lines in the stanzas..repeat....nice, again, something I don't normally see...Good job
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Re: Please belong to me
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by Jimmato on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 09:55:23 PM AEST
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Don't like the line " The cold rushed blast"
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Re: Please belong to me
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by evilfairy on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 10:13:23 PM AEST
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Pfffft - get pver it Jimmato! :-p
nah...in my head it is pronounced rush-ed |
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