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~ Lost the memory of the shape of your smile ~
Contributed by
evilfairy
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Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 02:18:04 AM in AEST
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Lost the memory of the shape of your smile
And the grin you would show
When Id done something crazy
It was there in my head and I didnt see it go
Cant recall the tone in your voice
The soft lilt to your words
Or your warm hope filled eyes
That I stored like old toys in the cupboard
Struggling hard to remember
All the things we would say
And how we would laugh
Figured those days would never fade away
Ive got the photos of you somewhere
Ill have to dig them out
But what if I forget theyre there?
When did I learn to do without?
MW 23.05.05
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Re: ~ Lost the memory of the shape of your smile ~
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by ForeverAlone on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 02:50:53 AM AEST
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Hmm, the ending seemed to make this really good, I like the questions, and the openess of it all...it kinda makes it powerful in its own unique way..Nicely done,
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Re: ~ Lost the memory of the shape of your smile ~
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by Jimmato on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 10:00:25 PM AEST
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| I like this one too. Hurry up and post something I can bag out. |
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Re: ~ Lost the memory of the shape of your smile ~
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by sicknivesevered on
Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 11:12:45 AM AEST
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| Very nice. It has a "tender" kind of feel to it; as if you don't know if its a good or bad thing that you've forgotten. (^_^)b |
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Re: ~ Lost the memory of the shape of your smile ~
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by Elfie on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 03:27:01 PM AEST
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| I love this poem so much, it makes me feel very nostalgic about somebody |
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Re: ~ Lost the memory of the shape of your smile ~
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 01:07:34 AM AEST
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isnt that the weirdest feeling when that happens? this is beautifully expressed:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: ~ Lost the memory of the shape of your smile ~
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by zenaprincess on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 06:38:43 AM AEST
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| this is one of my faves of the poems youve written evil....love it! |
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