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An Eternal Scar
Contributed by
Esther
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Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 06:21:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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It is a demon inside of you,
of whom you know naught of.
His conquest of your inner self,
destroys your good will and your love.
Like tentacles he drains the good,
and slyly departs with what he stole.
As he recedes, he leaves his mark.
The remains, now a poisoned soul.
The venom, an intoxication,
the invader, once the enemy,
Now established without shame,
the bitter tumor of Jealousy.
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Esther
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2005-05-23 18:21:40]
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Re: An Eternal Scar
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by Pollo_Picante1120 on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 07:29:51 PM AEST
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i love it! I loike the ways you describe jealousy as a poison and other metaphorical things. Keep it up. You're the only poet that ive seemed to really enjoy, (reading your writings.)
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