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Sleep
Contributed by
MyChemicalRomanceHeLeNa
on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 10:23:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Sleeping in a dream of fragile memories missing what I've lost to heartache and devour my last breath shining stars and listeless blazing flames of anger and distrust perhaps a falling angel caught my heart because i just wandered into a darkened empty plain simple yet not the same as love i don't want anyone to squeeze me they might take away my life I just want someone to hold me and walk me through the pain I'm standing alone and waiting insincere messages of hate sent to my soul to wreak upon my habits life is nothing more than a certainty of death light cannot be found happiness is a false reality living is a soft mortality sleeping is all i want stop this falling lesson save me from my heartache sing me to sleep dreaming of life is nothing short of suicide missing you is all this caused end it now for am i shallow hit me with this razor blade take away this tragedy of living and leave me bleeding screaming for something more close the door to reality and leave me to myself once more
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Re: Sleep
(User Rating: 1 ) by Loche on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 10:45:24 PM AEST (User
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That was amazing.. wow. I love the way you convey that raw emotion. |
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Re: Sleep
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 11:28:21 PM AEST (User
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Again another great write. Very emotional. I really like the way you put ti all together
very well done.
Keep writing
Keep smiling
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Re: Sleep
(User Rating: 1 ) by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 11:53:01 AM AEST (User
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Raw emotions and it hit close to home.. great poem...
christina |
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