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My Forever...Only For You!
Contributed by
abie05
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Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 02:44:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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if my voice can make you smile ...
then baby i'll talk forever ...
if my touch brings you so much joy
then i'll hold you in my arms forever ...
if my kisses could melt ur heart away...
then my lips is urs to kiss forever ...
if me always beside you is what ur heart desire ...
then i'll be there to hold you in my arms forever ...
if every beat of my heart can let you know im always here for you ...
then baby you'll hear my heart beating only for you forever
if one look is all it takes to make you mine ...
then gurl ... i'll lovingly look at u forever ...
if all these words i say to you makes ur life means so much more ...
then these words of passion i'll say to you ... forever
... coz baby you know i'll be here to love you ... forever ...
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2005-05-24 14:44:59]
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Re: My Forever...Only For You!
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by Janie on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 03:03:02 PM AEST
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| I like your meaning, and if your intention was just to make your girlfriend happy, you did that. If you were really trying to write a quality poem, you might want to work on being more poetic and editing for mistakes such as forgetting the "s" on the end of the word "desires" or writing "coz." |
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Re: My Forever...Only For You!
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by Man_On_High on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 07:11:36 PM AEST
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you got lots of love inside you...
shes a lucky girl for sure..
heartfelt...
M.O.H.
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Re: My Forever...Only For You!
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by Belcha on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 06:03:28 AM AEST
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| THERE S A LOTTA LOVE IN THIS ROOM ! A HELL OF A LOTTA LURVE, COME HERE GIVE ME A HUG. |
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