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The first night
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
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Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 03:00:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Well I spent the whole night awake looking at you
And when morning came I just rolled off the bed
So I would not wake you and to get breakfast going
So I tiptoed to the bath room to take a quick bath
I had to get cleaned up and smelling good for my baby
Naughty girl I could have sworn you were watching me
Bit made no deal about it and finished up
And then tiptoed out and put my cloths on
I passed over you to get to the door
Then made my way to the kitchen and got it going
I made you strawberry French toast with fresh juice
I warmed it up so it would not get cold
Then I brought it out to you, you were either still sleep
Or faking so I would wake you with a kiss
And so I did just that
I got onto the bed and put one of my knees between you legs
And kissed you softly, you must have been faking coz you kissed me back
I sat you up on the bed and rolled my side table over to you
And I fed you all the food little by little
I told you not to worry coz I had made everything low carb
Even though you dont really need to watch what you eat
I watched you eat and I loved it
You seemed to really enjoy everything and I was glad
After you had the last bite to eat I kissed you and put something in your hand
I had made it for you a month before you came
I wanted you to have something from me that you
Could always have with you
So you looked at it kissed and told me to put on you
So I did then we started kiss
And one thing led to another and we.
After we both just snuggled and played silly games
Like you know I love to do
I dont know how many times I said I loved you
I think it drove you insane and well I could not help my self
It started raining and you can hear the drops loudly falling on my roof
It rained so hard we both thought we were under a storm
We did not get out of the room and barely off the bed that day
It was all I needed and I hoped you did not mind
When night time came and the rained cleared out
We got dressed but did not really put much back on
We drove off to the beach and watched the stars
Well you watched the stars I just looked at you
We got off the sand and went to the pear
It was breeding time for the shrimp in the water
So you could see them glow from up top
You dared me to do something crazy so I
Stood up on the peer and dove off the side
And you looked down on me with the terrified look on your face
I yelled back at you and said its your turn and you said no way
I called you a chicken and then you dove off and landed close to me
But you did not come up after so I went under looking for you
I did not find you and screamed out your name
You snuck up behind me and gave me the scare of a life time
We both hugged and just continued to float around in the water
The current took us pretty far and I got the most stupid idea in my head
I dont know why I did it known how competitive you are
And I asked you if you wanted to race back to the shore
And so we did. We raced back barely taking in air and I dont know
How but I won I am pretty sure you let me win
And Im glad you did
So anyways once we got back onto the beach we got out inform of these little huts
And you asked me if I had planned this whole thing
And I grinned at you and said no I swear
But you knew I did and went along with it anyways
You did not say a word even when I took out the Champaign and big beach towels and blankets from the life guard post, and so I threw them no the clean white sand and we
We just held each other very close for the whole night
I asked you if you were hungry and you said you were famished
So I went back the life guards post and took out a picnic basket
I had made all sorts of yummy treats to feed each other
Small things in bundles and fruits and chocolates
I think you got a little tipsy from the Champaign
Coz you stood up and stared to spin around
And I just watched you
You were so amazing
You then told me to take off my sandals and bet me a kiss
That I could not catch you at all
And so I got up and just rushed you really fast
I caught you and you said you where not ready
And so I said I dont care and told you to kiss me anyways
And you pushed me off and we raced anyways
It took me a little but I caught you
Again I think you let me
Why do you have to be so competitive about everything?
But once I did catch you and got my reward
I looked at the big watch on one of the buildings and saw what time it was
I asked you if you wanted to stay and watch the sun come up
And you told me lets race back to the beach hut and the winner would pick
And I said fine and so we raced and both ran as fast as we could
And you beat me, but we kissed anyways and you decided to watch the sun come up
So we both sat back down and got wrapped into the blanket
And we did just that watch the sun come up well I mostly just looked at you
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Re: The first night
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by Gothchyk on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 07:02:04 PM AEST
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| "I win" hehe, you are always so thoughtful, the perfect day and night are written with in these lines. Beautiful....muaw |
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Re: The first night
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 12:19:17 AM AEST
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| very sweet. |
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Re: The first night
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 03:21:35 AM AEST
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wow.
Very good writing.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: The first night
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by sweetangeluk on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 12:05:09 PM AEST
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Like the song its such a perfect day so glad I spent it with you la la la.
Wonderful write
Love Angelxxx |
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