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Silver Lining
Contributed by
hauntedscorp
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Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 05:20:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
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A petal fallen to the ground
the rhythm of one's breathing a comforting sound
trees swaying in the wind;
forgiving all those that have sinned
A blossom opening up...
drinking from a half full cup
seeds planted; roots taking hold
A phoenix rising; breaking the mold
a bird singing his song of love,
and in one's heart's been born a dove...
The sun rising, promising a new day
darkness and shadows now kept at bay
A caterpillar turns to butterfly and spreads its wings
walls that were built, are now crumbling
a squirrel dodges a car for another day,
all those rainy clouds have washed away
The moon smiles down with all its glow;
where once was a door, is now a window....
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Re: Silver Lining
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by Fears on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 05:37:32 PM AEST
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| very good, write. I loved it and every detail that you mashed together. |
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Re: Silver Lining
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 06:25:03 PM AEST
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A picture of beauty and awe.
Detailed.
Vibrant.
Stunning.
-Romanticist. |
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Re: Silver Lining
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by MorningDove on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 07:19:47 PM AEST
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Magnificent feelings. I love it when life begins to open up and show it beauty. It is an amazing thing.
Smiles,
Rita |
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Re: Silver Lining
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by jyssvw22 on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 09:04:15 PM AEST
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i really like this one...great image
nice job
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Re: Silver Lining
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 11:55:39 AM AEST
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great write. I liked it. I love all your poems.. never stop writing.
christina |
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Re: Silver Lining
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 03:12:44 PM AEST
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So optimistic and uplifting!!!
Well crafted and woven feelings of rebirth. |
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Re: Silver Lining
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 10:39:51 PM AEST
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| its starting to tick me off that your first posts are better than my first 200, lol =] i rather liked this one a lot. ive read more poems in my lifetime than i would have cared to, but this one is one that im glad to have read. from your first line to the last i loved it. keep up the excellent work, scorp =] |
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Re: Silver Lining
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by sweetangeluk on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 06:25:33 PM AEST
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What positive happy vibes opening up like a flower in bloom.
Wonderful
Love Angelxxx |
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Re: Silver Lining
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by Dorkfish on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 06:54:39 PM AEST
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| I absolutely loved that poem. You are a creative and beautiful writer. That shows you are a strong person with a good outlook. Keep it up, you are talented. |
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Re: Silver Lining
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 01:50:46 AM AEST
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| Wonderful! Just a bunch of thoughts swirling together? No, now come on Scorp. Your full flowering colorful blossom of thoughts beautifully swirling with wonderful imagery togther :) |
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Re: Silver Lining
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 20th November 2014 @ 05:52:12 PM AEST
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this is exquisite! reminds me of when i sit in my garden, so
peaceful and serene like this beautiful poem! most certainly
one of my new favorites of yours!
hugs n' love nessa
p.s. it's nice to know i'm not the only one all googly over petals |
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