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LOSING MY MIND
Contributed by
kydistortion69
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Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 06:45:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I see them, they are there!
hideous creatures
crawling in the walls,
with their vile smell
that is how I know, they are there!
smirking and singing
with such gall!
but the song, I can't tell.
I hear them, these cunning devils!
as they scamper
through the walls,
disqusting and putrid
I feel their presence
sense their will,
they mean to crawl in my head!
to leave the wall!
demented beasts with their intent.
No one sees them but me
but they are there!
no one hears them
but they scream at me!
evil communers, taunting indeed!
I see them there, others don't
but they are there,
behind those dying walls
talking about me!
deviant tricksters, no never!
not me!
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Re: LOSING MY MIND
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 09:19:04 PM AEST
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Yikes! Makes me think of drinkers DT's...lol
I hope for your sake it's not! The poem's subject was a little elusive, but that kind of adds to the intrigue...Keep it up!
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