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The New Me?
Contributed by
blue_angel
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Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 08:47:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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my hair blows in front of my face
a strand of gold flows into my eye
a tear drips onto my lips
with my blue irises to the sky
the eternity of the endless night
inspires me to great extent
and without any hesitation
i bend to knee with repent
water collects in the corner of eyes
i brush away my shame
a broken life in my hands
and i know i am to blame
Bring my hair behind my ear
put it behind me and move on
i admit thats who i was
but i promise now that that girl is gone
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Re: The New Me?
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by Jaycee on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 09:15:08 PM AEST
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Well, I am not crazy about the line and i know i am to blame because you have been through too much and it was categorically not your fault. But I like the part about your blue irises and the inspiration and moving on, because that girl is gone. The new and improved Jennie (not that the old model was bad, it's just that this model is happier and that is a wonderful improvement!!!) I am glad that you are doing so well :D
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Re: The New Me?
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by MorningDove on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 09:35:22 PM AEST
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Well, I don't know you yet, Jenni, but if your heart and soul feel happier I would agree that YES it is true. And I must say I am delighted for you because life will be so much brighter.
Blessed be.
Rita |
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Re: The New Me?
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 09:55:38 PM AEST
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A poem about someone breaking free of their grim past will always get an applause from me...Congratulations! May you have many sunny days ahead....
Scorp. |
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Re: The New Me?
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by Skinney86 on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 10:39:05 PM AEST
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| Always great to know someone that can put the past behind and move ahead.... Bless you and everything you do, you deserve all the happiness in the world! |
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Re: The New Me?
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 02:02:02 AM AEST
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Very good writing.
keep the faith, my friend.
huggs,
emy |
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