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Just For You
Contributed by
razorblade_kisses1392
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Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 08:56:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I'm bleeding crimpson
shedding life
begging to be heard
if you want a suicide
just go and say the word
I gave you my heart
and you ripped it in half
I gave you my attention
and you just sat there and laughed
Bleeding, screaming, aching pain
I feel as if I've gone insane
my love for you will surely kill
scary thing is I love you still
why should I die?
I feel so confused
as I look into your eyes
I've been so used
As I sit on my bed
and try not to faint
and I stare at the ceiling
I'm not ready to die
you're not worth my time
I may be pretty worthless
but why choose suicide?
I have nothing to give
you of all know that's true
I can't belive this was all just for you
but I still want to live
and I'll always HATE you!!
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2005-05-24 20:56:33]
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Re: Just For You
(User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 09:39:23 PM AEST
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few spelliong errors, but all good tho, i liked the way this flowed, seemed as if it was just a free verse off the top of your mind write, i like that, good job, you have talent keep it up
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