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Poet I Am Not
Contributed by
blue_angel
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Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 10:44:39 AM in AEST
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is there nothing left for me
must i live on alone
i cannot help this feeling
that im on my own
i cannot stay any longer
for i will not be missed
leaving this place unloved
young and never kissed
a poet i decide i am not
so no one will protest
dont lie to me again
im so far from being the best
unlikely am i for change
i leave you with a cough
i clear my throat and say at last
blue_angel signing off
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Re: Poet I Am Not
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by mylady on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 10:54:49 AM AEST
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| It nice .. i like it.. |
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Re: Poet I Am Not
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by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 10:58:08 AM AEST
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Funny...you say you are not a poet, yet you just posted a poem...
I think you know people don't want you to leave...or you wouldn't have posted, am I right?
Well, it certainly got my attention.
This is a good write, btw, though you could do with some capital letters.
Good write,
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: Poet I Am Not
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 11:25:16 AM AEST
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This was a good, personal write, and I don't know why you'd want to leave...I think you're a good poet, and we ALL improve over time. Don't feed into the negative people; just write from the heart and you can't go wrong...
Scorp. |
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Re: Poet I Am Not
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 11:38:53 AM AEST
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A poet is someone who expresses themselves with words whether in rhyme or prose style. You just wrote a rhyme so yes, you are a poet. No one is a perfect poet and it takes many years to write "perfect" poetry. Only through reading words from Poe, Frost, Longfellow, or your current poets on this site, can you gain knowledge of what poetry is. Continue writing, whether here or anywhere, poetry is a form of release. So keep at it, and hone those skills! The best of luck to you, whatever you decide!
Angel always...godspeed...joni |
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Re: Poet I Am Not
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by PainfulSpirit06 on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 11:50:54 AM AEST
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| You are a poet. No matter how you feel about it, otherwise you wouldn't have posted it on a poetry site, right? You don't have to care about what other people think of your poetry. It is for you to release how you feel so you won't go insane (like me, lol). Don't stop what you are doing, it's a gift that many wish they had. |
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Re: Poet I Am Not
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by Skinney86 on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 12:04:22 PM AEST
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| Your a poet and you know it, this is very good and i like the phyme scheme |
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Re: Poet I Am Not
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by blue_angel on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 12:32:04 PM AEST
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gawsh u ppl kno me too well... thanx a lot i needed sum encouragement i've been a bit down lately...
luv u all,
jennie* plz continue to comment id love your input and support it all rilly helps... ; ) |
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Re: Poet I Am Not
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by sadsadman on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 01:00:03 PM AEST
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| never give up never surrender thank you |
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Re: Poet I Am Not
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by poetrygirl1991 on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 03:00:45 PM AEST
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| this poem was very poem, i understand what either yew or your character is going thru ive went thru the same, yew are a great poet tho, dont give up!!im a big fan, keep writing~~Chrissy |
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Re: Poet I Am Not
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by poetrygirl1991 on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 03:00:56 PM AEST
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| this poem was very poem, i understand what either yew or your character is going thru ive went thru the same, yew are a great poet tho, dont give up!!im a big fan, keep writing~~Chrissy |
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Re: Poet I Am Not
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by spazz911 on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 08:27:36 PM AEST
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| OMG jennie u r the best poet i no n u no u can't deny it... u r my influence w/o u i would not have had the guts to post my stuff here 2 u showed me the light....kc |
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Re: Poet I Am Not
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by Jaycee on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 10:23:22 PM AEST
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i stuck with this site because of you jennie. one of my other friends on the site was ***** when i mentioned that, but it is true nonetheless. you bring so much to your poetry, such heartfelt emotion, such life. kc has the right of it. you are an inspiration. not a poet? oh, please. you're close to 100 poems submitted in such a short time. and guess what, they are damned good. if you sign off, i will bribe kc to tie you in front of her PC and make you write poetry :P seriously, just about everyone i care for on this site has been down lately. i'm not sure why and i guess it was your turn and i am glad for all the encouragement you received with comments. you can't go, okay? a lot of pressure to put on you, i know, and i know that you have things on your mind (just got back from your blog) but don't deny who you are. your poetry is part of you. i just dabble but it is like who you are, that and your music. you would hurt yourself most of all if you left, i think, although you would be so missed. i hope some of this is coherent to convince you.
hot cocoa and blankets,
jaycee |
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Re: Poet I Am Not
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by suicidal_imbecile on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 12:27:28 AM AEST
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| You say your not a good poet eh? Look at the peice of work you just did... LOOK AT IT. it flows, its sounds terrific, it rhymes which makes its go along nicely, it has a message, Darling i think you wrote an awsome poem. Do you know why i decide to post on almost every poem i like, because i know theres somebody hurthing behind it. I would love to see people comment on mine, i am completely ashamed of them, i only show them to you guys because you dont know me and if i cry about writings that nobody liked, they wont know, and the poetry about it i wont show. So by helping you could write a little something about other peoples peoms and maybe we'll all start doing that, then if you read a poem you like, comment and move on then the author feels acknowledged... come back and relax, write a poem about how much you hated my post, just do whatever until you get these silly images out, maybe you never will but try to remember that most of us love your poetry we're just too lazy to write |
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Re: Poet I Am Not
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by sprinter27 on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 09:44:09 PM AEST
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it's a good poem, jennie! and oh jeez! you are a great poet and you know it. you're a helluv a lot better at it than me. and i totally agree with Jaycee on this one... except for the 2nd to last line (?) (lol, sry if you rd this, jaycee. but jennie, if you need proof that your a poet... look up ^ at what you just wrote.
hugs (wow.... did I write that)
~sprints |
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