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Someone else's
Contributed by
xxbreathlessx
on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 02:16:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Endlessly I feel into the boundless limits
In your eyes.
Falling until I became nothing
But a whisper of existence.
Tasting each temptation thrown upon me
Through this doubtless rain of uncertainty ,
But I fell away to my senses
And left only to awake.
I realize that your breath no longer
Speaks words of truth as
It dances against my ear.
Am I that gullible?
Im fooled by your eyes meaningless deception,
Of nothing that I know,
Nothing that I want,
But everything that makes my pulse race
And my hands sweat.
Fool me with your kiss.
Let me taste the lies upon your tongue.
Give me sweet surrender from reality,
So well held at the palm of my hand.
Pull away and let me look into your eyes
Once more.
To remind myself that this isnt what I want.
Your eyes have lost their shine,
My hands have gotten cold and dry.
Your breath against my ear
With all the lies you sold.
Ive broken free of falling
And regained realitys grip on life.
Your nothing of what I want, what I hope, what I dream.
..Your someone elses Knight in shining armor.
Copyright ©
xxbreathlessx
... [
2005-05-25 14:16:30]
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Re: Someone else's
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by poetrygirl1991 on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 02:53:08 PM AEST
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| great poem this was very good, ive had experiences like this. it was hard but i eventually borke up with him and moved on..keep writing, yew are great at it, ~~Chrissy |
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Re: Someone else's
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by mylady on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 03:05:59 PM AEST
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| Nice poem . |
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Re: Someone else's
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by Eyeris on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 03:46:01 PM AEST
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| I know all too well about the topic of this poem..good job... |
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Re: Someone else's
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by bethers_is_my_baby on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 04:59:33 PM AEST
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| great job:) |
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