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Distempered Harmony
Contributed by
entropytripping
on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 05:49:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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Polish on these open wounds
Then wiped away to start anew
Augment this burn I ask of you
Stitches in perfect porcelain
No longer bravado
Obsession follows suite
To linger here in absentia
While black seeps vertigo
Was never a friend of mine before,
This tired treason on one once loved
A mar with which Im reassured
Now recognized entirely.
Suspended in oblivion,
One to which I used to run
Crippled heart is caving in
To conquer all, my last great sin.
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entropytripping
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2005-05-25 17:49:56]
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Re: Distempered Harmony
(User Rating: 1 )
by ElatedNBliss on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 05:55:09 PM AEST
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| god i feel stupid cuase i didn;t know what all the words in your peom ment.... but i like the crippled heart is caving in..that i did understand. keep up the good work and while u do that..i'm gonna get a dictionary...heehee |
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Re: Distempered Harmony
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by justme03 on
Monday, 5th December 2005 @ 12:40:45 PM AEST
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this is bloody awesome! i love ur use of larger words uncommonly used. its a real awesome write!
lots o love, Kortnie |
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