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Once Upon A Dream...
Contributed by
mina-1
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Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 10:06:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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The night is blanketed
With pearl dazzling stars
The moon nestled amidst
Shadowing the stars from afar
I walk through the haven
Of my wildest dreams
As loving thoughts of you flow
Into my mind like a stream
I sing my hearts harmonious melody
As I pick a pretty bunch of flowers
Years of dreaming of our love
Come over me like a springtime shower
Then from out of the blue
A stranger appears before my eyes
He walks on up to me
Focused on the bewilderment in my eyes
He takes hold of my hand
As his other hand slips around my waist
He sings my hearts melody that I sing
His voice so ever sweet and chaste
Looking at him something seems familiar
'Twas as if we've met before
As he softly kisses my lips
Passions of love burn galore
We dance so merrily
In our eyes love's sparks beam
I know I've danced with him before
For 'twas once upon a dream...
Copyright ©
mina-1
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Re: Once Upon A Dream...
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 10:13:30 PM AEST
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Beautifully crafted Sue! I was peering out my window at the stars when I was reading this, and could almost picture this scene before me....*sigh* Well done my friend.
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Re: Once Upon A Dream...
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by ForeverAlone on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 10:18:55 PM AEST
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Beautiful mina...But i didnt know you are still here, grrr....you told me nothing....*pouts*...but im happy you are =]]
Awesome poetry and best of luck to you, as always
~Clark |
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Re: Once Upon A Dream...
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by Gothchyk on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 10:19:21 PM AEST
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| It's nice to read another one of your wonderful poems. Amazing job, i could see the stars and flowers painted in my mind. |
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Re: Once Upon A Dream...
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by jmpy84 on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 12:43:33 AM AEST
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| wonder as always sue |
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Re: Once Upon A Dream...
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by loveisendless on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 01:02:03 AM AEST
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So romantic & beautiful,just like that of the poet herself! I'd love to sing & bring you everything & fall in love & have a fantasy with a fling & present you with a lovely dimond ring!! for you are the world & my special girl!!!
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Lots Of Love,
DAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Re: Once Upon A Dream...
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 01:23:01 AM AEST
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wow such a beautiful write.
so divend and sweet. |
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Re: Once Upon A Dream...
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by venkat on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 01:29:16 AM AEST
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Wow..what a splendid dream!!!..this is absolutely beautiful work...aww..hugs.
venkat |
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Re: Once Upon A Dream...
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 03:15:01 AM AEST
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| Sue I'm ***** at writing these comments..so I'll just say what I thought when I read it,,,,beautiful absolutely beautiful... |
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Re: Once Upon A Dream...
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by FleurdeSang on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 06:27:41 AM AEST
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Let me say just one word, because if I use more, it'll probably defile such a gorgeous piece...
F
L
A
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L
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S
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(As always, your writing is a divine dream... Merci beaucoup for sharing.)
P.S.- Glad to see you're still here!! *Huggles!!*
Forever, Stephy. :-) |
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Re: Once Upon A Dream...
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by DorianChambers on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 09:21:48 AM AEST
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A peice of divinity handed down from the
heavens, leaving it's indelable emotions
upon these pages, thank you 4 these words
of poetic bliss, you are a seamtress who can
weave beauty from the simplest of poetic
threads, creating a cloak of spiritual beauty . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Once Upon A Dream...
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by sride686 on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 11:37:24 AM AEST
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| A much enjoyed write my friend and as most of your work has been these days it was perfectly worded with so much love. I’m glad you have someone to share this with and I wish I had someone writing to me this way. Take care my friend and thank you for yet another beautiful work of art filled with love. I need to read of love and happy things right now so what better then Sue’s book of love. Bye for now your friend….Steve |
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Re: Once Upon A Dream...
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by Spazzo on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 04:53:51 PM AEST
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A very beautiful poem here. So very loving.
Scott |
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Re: Once Upon A Dream...
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by MorningDove on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 04:59:06 PM AEST
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You write from your heart so beautifully. It pours out like sunshine and plays over everyone. May the keeper of your love arrive soon and make this dream reality.
Rita |
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Re: Once Upon A Dream...
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by somedaylove on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 06:24:26 PM AEST
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| reading your poems is almost like watching a play at times I can see the people as i read your words wonderful write glad your back............. Keep it up |
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Re: Once Upon A Dream...
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 10:59:56 PM AEST
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enchantingly exquiste, i love how you wrote this:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Once Upon A Dream...
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 06:18:03 PM AEST
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| I am so sorry that I forget to read your poetry sometimes. (I am out reading other poetry) This is bueatiful. You are truly a talented poet. |
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Re: Once Upon A Dream...
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by candysears on
Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 09:33:10 PM AEST
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Great write,very good
God Bless |
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