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tell me mama
Contributed by
freda_burrel
on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 01:25:33 AM in AEST
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conceived in the month
of your birthday.
only thing to say about that
i was the fourth
dependant one
had to grow up quick
it seems
hand me downs
throughout my life
not a new thing
i could wear
nor was it the happiest of time
those times just wasnt fair.
today i come to tell you
im the child you had back then.
i cant detest my growing up
you were the best of all there.
but im here right now to ask you.
mama this isnt fair.
but can you tell me mama
am i from that love affair?
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Re: tell me mama
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by Pisces101 on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 10:00:43 AM AEST
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I like the poem. Very different style. Its interesting. The meaning I assume is held close by you and your mother only. Good work. Keep up the writes.
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Re: tell me mama
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by sweetpixiegrl on
Sunday, 27th November 2005 @ 08:44:29 PM AEST
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wow! this gave me literal goose bumps.
and i dont know what the style is but it is interesting and kept my interest.
kudo's
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