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invisible
Contributed by
cinderella88
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Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 04:43:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I look into the mirror and see
A girl that is too ugly, too dull for you to notice
Oh how I long for you to notice me
Id do anything for you to just look at me
Id do anything not to be invisible to you
But thats all I am
Invisible, dull, ugly
Ill never be one of those popular, beautiful girls
The girls that turn heads wherever they go
The girls that everyone worships
Is it wrong for me to like you?
I barely know you, but you intrigue me
You send off a vibe, unlike anyone elses
Yours is so unique, confusing and addictive
Will you ever notice me the way I notice you?
Im just that girl
The dull, ugly, invisible girl
Wanting to be so much more
Just wanting to stand out
Wanting you to notice her
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cinderella88
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2005-05-26 04:43:29]
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Re: invisible
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by bethers_is_my_baby on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 05:45:18 AM AEST
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hey, u may feel that way now. i know that for years i was like that, but i have realized that my beauty just took longer to develope and now, well im definatly now ugly anymore, just wait, one of theses days, you are gonna knock them dead (figurativly speakling) just hang in there:)
*~peace and love~* |
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Re: invisible
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by NoSaint on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 09:14:09 AM AEST
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| i felt that way long ago...but i found out each one of us are unique and worth noticing...work on the beauty of your heart and others will notice you and you will bloom like the rarest flower...although now it seems it will never happen...we grow, we shine |
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Re: invisible
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by Pisces101 on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 10:07:20 AM AEST
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You know what? I felt the same way about this guy almost 2 years ago... Turned out he felt the same about me. We are still dating and have a wonderfully beautiful relationship. You never kow what is just around the corner. You hold your head high and live like there isn't a tomorrow. There is something out there for you... maybe him.
Keep up the wonderful work!
Sarah |
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Re: invisible
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by Jaycee on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 11:43:19 AM AEST
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| Sometimes guys don't pick up on subtelties and you may have to make the 1st move. The old cliché that beauty is only skin deep is true. If he is as special as you think, he won't limit his thinking to just those of pulchitrude, regardless of how you perceive yourself. Let the petals of your soul seek the light and blossom! |
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