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Clouds around your soul...
Contributed by
In_a_While
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Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 12:39:01 PM in AEST
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clouds that flow by
bring tears that won't cry
hold them until a great storm
sure they look mean
and lightning is seen
but tears are all that will fall
so thunder is near
but sounds not to fear
arms are warm here to hold you
the tears start to pour
tomorrow be more
than the pain you feel here today
yes you'll be grand
upon words you will stand
your poetry is the light of us all....!
dw
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Re: Clouds around your soul...
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by sride686 on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 01:43:58 PM AEST
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A good write and I really like the last stanza it gives so much hope.
yes you'll be grand
upon words you will stand
your poetry is the light of us all....!
Keep up the good writes my friend and I'll always read them if I have the time. bye for now my friend.....Steve |
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Re: Clouds around your soul...
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by mylady on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 01:51:33 PM AEST
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| nice poem...... mylady |
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