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Pain and Comfort
Contributed by
sride686
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Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 12:55:25 PM in AEST
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Daring and bold,
beauty and pride
A strong women
with so much pain
That you hide
You smile and joke
But Im not a fool
I feel your pain
And it cuts to my soul
For you had a life
That once was yours
But just like me
That marriage was torn
You lost a love
And you lost your life
Now you and your son
Are alone in your life
You have so much strength
And eternal bliss
To continue so strong
In a life such as this
Your beauty I see
In the strength you give me
For my life is lost
And in so much pain
But you give me a smile
When I hear your name
And its your cute country voice
That always drives me insane
But its your heart that I need
To comfort my pain
And I need it tonight
So hold me close
So I wont have to cry
And comfort my pain
That comes from inside
For were to lost souls
And together will cry
And find our comfort
And strength from our lifes
For a love may come
And a love may go
But strength from our words
Will forever grow
For if were together
Or forever apart
Youve touch my life
And youll be in my heart
Copyright ©
sride686
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2005-05-26 12:55:25]
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Re: Pain and Comfort
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by mylady on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 01:06:10 PM AEST
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| very nice... like it.. |
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Re: Pain and Comfort
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 04:55:11 PM AEST
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I think this is a good poem Steve, and congratulations on the newfound love. I'm sure your special lady will love it too!
Scorp. |
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Re: Pain and Comfort
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by somedaylove on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 06:58:59 PM AEST
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Very nice write..............share it with her..........best of luck with this new love...........keep it up
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Re: Pain and Comfort
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by mina-1 on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 07:19:57 AM AEST
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WoW Steve I love it. You never told me u found a new love? Well come on spill the beans... She'll be the happiest person in the whole wide world. For she has won over the heart of my very dear and loving friend. Bless ur heart dear Steve and may ur heart always be filled with love and happiness. Goodluck to ya darls I'm so happy for u.
love always ur friend forever,
~sue~ |
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Re: Pain and Comfort
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by blue_angel on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 10:19:58 AM AEST
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aww wow this is a wonderful piece! who ever u wrote this about must be so happy and so should u! keep writing and i hope you're happier now...
luv n hugs as always,
jennie* |
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Re: Pain and Comfort
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by In_a_while on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 02:06:12 PM AEST
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| A very nice write that tells of love's struggles and triumphs! It's good to hear that you've found someone to share yourself with. Keep up the great writing as usual and look forward to more. dw |
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