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Forever and Forever
Contributed by
jyssvw22
on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 04:30:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Come join this
Circle of truth
You belong
Take a hand
And hold on tight
Squeeze with all your might
Close your eyes
I swear I wont bite
This time
Create this bond
You are amongst friends
Feel free to share
A memory
Of a lifes tale
Dont be shy now
Honesty
Will ultimately
Prevail
Focus
On this window, of
Opportunity knocks
Just let it enter
Undo the bolt and locks
Just speak
To start
Just be yourself
It wont hurt
Just be you
The circle
Gets tenser
Each word
Brings us
Tighter and tighter
While our hands
Fall in love
Forever
And forever
Copyright ©
jyssvw22
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2005-05-26 16:30:47]
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Re: Forever and Forever
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 04:50:20 PM AEST
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Hmmm this was a different kind of write for you...I found this intriguing. The third stanza really stood out for me.
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Re: Forever and Forever
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by MorningDove on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 05:14:25 PM AEST
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Wos, I really really love this poem. The structure is great. The flow is great. The whole thing is great. Keep up this kind of work. You are excellent at it.
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