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So Beautiful It Hurts (so beautiful it kills)
Contributed by
Thin_skin
on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 05:48:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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So beautiful it hurts
A glimpse of you my tears jerk
Id like to show you why
For you id die, you say goodbye
And I will cry, try to fly
So light and limp, you lay me down
Without your crown you turn me round
Stroke this face, undo the lace
Release my shape, its yours, embrace
You run away and I will chase
Hold my tongue I need a taste
Pray you live and never die
Kill me now and dont ask why
So beautiful it kills
This crazy mix of thrills and pills
You take me by surprise
those little lies, your sky blue eyes
my soaker when it dries
get off your knees, its time to rise
lick me hard and dont you sweat
you are mine you cant forget
penetrate and hold me tight
youve got me under thumb tonight
so beautiful it hurts
one kiss from you my tears jerk
so beautiful it kills
one touch from you my blood, it spills
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Re: So Beautiful It Hurts (so beautiful it kills)
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by ElatedNBliss on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 06:10:06 PM AEST
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| i really like this...it sounds kind of heartfelt yet physical |
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Re: So Beautiful It Hurts (so beautiful it kills)
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by Fears on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 06:17:22 PM AEST
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i liked your poem, meaningful and well written. A good question..is love real? or just a fantasy?
Keep writing/posting
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Re: So Beautiful It Hurts (so beautiful it kills)
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 10:39:04 PM AEST
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This was an interesting read. Full of subliminals....Well written.
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