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Summer Eclipse
Contributed by
stellar
on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 06:58:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Soft touches
Warm breezes
Cold nights
Without reasons
Fire glistens
A hole was healing
Flame dies without feeling
Fourteen chances
Make new lesions
Fourteen Junes
In just one season
Cut it deep
Slide right through
Break two thousand into two
This is a nightmare
Inside of a dream
It's a kingdom
With only a queen
It's a change in years
From one to the next
It's a haunting town
Beneath
a
Summer Eclipse
Copyright ©
stellar
... [
2005-05-26 18:58:27]
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Re: Summer Eclipse
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by MorningDove on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 08:04:37 PM AEST
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I feel the sadness in your heart through your words. I am sorry for the loss in your life. I hope love will come again soon for you.
Rita |
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Re: Summer Eclipse
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 09:48:48 PM AEST
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| your work is seriously unappreciated here. this was amazing, and should have more comments and reads, just like most of your poems most likely. |
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Re: Summer Eclipse
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by nachi1981 on
Monday, 14th March 2011 @ 07:40:36 PM AEST
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| very nice. short and sweet. |
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