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Everlasting Thunder
Contributed by
jyssvw22
on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 08:12:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The clear water that reflects your image back
While the septum in your nostrils begins to crack
That the air you breathed
Was kept inside beyond its capabilities
The lungs which mediate
The cells of life never procreate
While the shadows of facts
Delineates and appropriates
The funding for its attack
When the black masks
Reveal their white eyes
When the dilated pupils
Burn the retinas inside
Feel me pull you close by
And whisper you
A babys last
Lullaby
Muster enough strength to stand and take your whip
The lashes that inflict you have sunk the battle ship
Invaders that mistake you for a foe of the kings creed
Give credence to the documents that cause you to bleed
The fresh cut grass on a summers day
A delicate tulip opens to the lights ray
The overriding symptoms will not obey
While the clogged arteries
Causes the nourishment to delay
A sudden burst of energy
A silence motivating factor
An unforeseen miracle
A likely disaster
Dont blink an eyelid
Dont insult your master
Prepare for hell
Or earths wonders
The rain and the wind
Brought the
Everlasting
Thunder
Copyright ©
jyssvw22
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2005-05-26 20:12:49]
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Re: Everlasting Thunder
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 12:18:37 AM AEST
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Okay, I think I'm ready to leave a comment now. I've re-read this countless times in the past couple hours, and admittedly had to look up 'septum' in the dictionary...lol
(Perhaps dropping out of high school wasn't such a hot idea!!) I have to say, I felt MANY emotions reading this, it was almost like reading several different poems in one....I like this immensely, and the thought put into this leaves me a little speechless, and at one or two parts I almost, ALMOST shed a tear....(not something easy to accomplish) I will say bravo my friend, and this was intense....
Scorp.
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Re: Everlasting Thunder
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 11:19:35 AM AEST
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| Enjoyable dark in its power. Calls for strength and responsibility it would seem. Good write! |
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