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Issues and Problems
Contributed by
happynikki
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Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 10:48:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Anger and Isolation
all alone
with a touch of depression
...that will never be gone
Scars and Cutting
the only escape
everything seems to be disappearing
...except the pain
Tears and Loneliness
neverending
without one single kiss
...so keep on crying
Sadness and Disappointment
to everyone
try to change, but can't
...happiness seems done
Love and Hate
no difference
it's all the same
...or so it seems in the end
Friends and Promises
never to be broken
is what everyone says
...but guess what, they can
Depression and Screams
everyone should do
to be relieved
...and unhappy too
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happynikki
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2005-05-26 22:48:17]
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Re: Issues and Problems
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 10:51:07 PM AEST
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This is a very.. sad poem.. i like it though. great job!
Alex |
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Re: Issues and Problems
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by emystar on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 11:27:25 PM AEST
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Very sad but written well.
I'm so sorry that life for u is so down.
I care so pm me any time.
luv, huggs, prayer,
emy |
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Re: Issues and Problems
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by Skinney86 on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 11:50:29 PM AEST
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| Very depressing poem, but so well written... sad :( |
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Re: Issues and Problems
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by heartless_soul on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 02:05:25 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC, I hope you will have fun here I know that we do.
Yes I know what you are saying (mabey not to your extent but just the same...) this was a well writen poem it would do many people good to read it to know what its like for people like us, just know that there are peopl out there (and here) that can relate to what you are going through, so if you need to talk we are here for you. this was a very emotianal first posting thank you for sharing it with us. I do hope that you will be able to see the brighter sid eof you life soon I will pray for you. Be well
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Re: Issues and Problems
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 05:07:12 AM AEST
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Sorry to hear that you cut yourself; some people close to me do that, and I feel for anyone that would do that to themselves. This poem I think was a good vent for you, and you should keep expressing yourself through poetry. Hope it helps you....
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