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Please Don't Together Forever I'm Scared
Contributed by
mylastwords
on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 12:09:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Please Don't
Don't break my heart,
It's been broken before.
I just want to be loved,
And cared for.
Hold me tonight,
And don't let go.
Warm me with your presence,
Keep me safe tonight.
I don't want this to end,
Let this night last forever.
Take my face in your hands,
And I'll kiss your sweet lips.
Look into my eyes,
And say you love me.
Show me your soul,
And I'll hold it close to my heart.
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Together Forever
You broke me with your words,
Shattered my heart
And my soul
Ripped me apart
Till I broke down and cried
How could you hurt me so much
When you said you loved me
I was blinded by love
And now I'm broken
Lying on the cold floor
All I do is cry
Thinking about you
Crushes me more and more
This wasn't supposed to happen
We were supposed to be together forever
That's what you said
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I'm Scared
I'm scared
Coz I think I'm falling
Will he hurt me?
He said he wouldn't
I feel so insecure
Why can't I be confident?
I thought I was ok with that sorta stuf
Maybe I'm not
Why is the past coming back to haunt me?
What did I do wrong?
Am I a fool
For loving again?
Am i setting myself up
Just to be hurt?
Will he break my heart?
Coz I dunno how much heartbreak I can take
Will he fall for me?
And will he treat me well?
I'm just so scared
Please don't break me
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Re: Please Don't Together Forever I'm Scared
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by emystar on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 04:36:37 AM AEST
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Very good writing.
I can relate to them all.
huggs,
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Re: Please Don't Together Forever I'm Scared
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by Versigh on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 03:07:32 PM AEST
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| Your meters are a little off.. lol rythm of the poem that is. Anyways nicely done though. I can deffinetly relate... my thoughts are more horrible though. If you have read my poetry... you'd know. All three were wonderful though. The feeling of being broken... very common but you use it as if it wasn't... lovely. =P |
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Re: Please Don't Together Forever I'm Scared
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 10:46:03 AM AEST
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1st----romantic, (2) sad, (3) personal, deep.
Next time only post one poem at a time, cause reading them like this takes away from them...The words get all jumbled up, and makes the reader forget what they just read....
Keep up the good writes! Scorp. |
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