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DEEP DOWN KINDDA LUV
Contributed by
emystar
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Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 12:42:49 AM in AEST
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Someone shattered her world
into itsie bitsie smitherens.
Left her in deep dark pain.
She had no more strength 2 gain.
God sent her a hippy smilen.
He brought her
deep down kindda luv
on wings flowing with doves.
Tha deep down kindda luv.
deep, deep, deep down.
Like a panter he watched
the Indian maiden and three kids.
Even after it was over many years.
A great spirit now, he is.
Now you're in Hippy heaven
Your spirit still speaks to me.
Cherish each moment you say
Live this moment, never forget
today.
Copyright ©
emystar
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2005-05-27 00:42:49]
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Re: DEEP DOWN KINDDA LUV
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by bernard on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 02:20:53 AM AEST
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| Looking back over the past is always for me a pleasure. Good write Emy top marks from bernard. |
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Re: DEEP DOWN KINDDA LUV
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by mina-1 on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 08:18:36 AM AEST
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Emy this is sad, yet so beautiful. You have such a talent in writing that it leaves us looking like amatuers my friend. God Bless his soul and may he rest in peace. Smile Emy, for he's always watching over u. A beautifully written and conveyed song.
Blessings to u and urs my friend.
love always,
~sue~ |
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Re: DEEP DOWN KINDDA LUV
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 10:47:09 AM AEST
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| Sad write, but very good and well expressed. Poignant. |
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Re: DEEP DOWN KINDDA LUV
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by sweetangeluk on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 11:50:44 AM AEST
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Beautiful Emmy. May he look after you from the spirit world.
((((HUGS)))))
Lovely picture and wonderful music
Love Angelxxxx |
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Re: DEEP DOWN KINDDA LUV
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by DorianChambers on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 12:20:43 PM AEST
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oh this was very touching, a beautiful write
in every way . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: DEEP DOWN KINDDA LUV
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 08:55:48 PM AEST
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I love the way you write with such originality, saying it as it would be spoken and to do that well is a gift in itself.
Johnny. |
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Re: DEEP DOWN KINDDA LUV
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 04:16:18 AM AEST
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| A really good poem from a really good poet..as you can tell I liked it,,, |
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Re: DEEP DOWN KINDDA LUV
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by reflections on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 09:25:03 PM AEST
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You have recorded for all of us a great truth. When you honestly live the moment at hand, it will live forever . . . never to be forgotten. Your last line says it all.
John
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Re: DEEP DOWN KINDDA LUV
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 06:30:14 PM AEST
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Oh Emy dear there is so much wisdom in this poem of yours. Sad, and yet consoling at the end. You know me I love happy endings I love your imagery, in your image and also in the your writing. I'm so sorry you suffered another loss.
I'm here for you dear.
Thank you little Emy for all you nice comments alos
Warm love
consuemom |
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Re: DEEP DOWN KINDDA LUV
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by secretwind on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 10:20:52 PM AEST
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Deep Down you are soooooooo
sweet. |
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Re: DEEP DOWN KINDDA LUV
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by myheartsvoice on
Monday, 9th April 2007 @ 02:49:04 PM AEST
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your writting is beautiful emy, it has the child like innosence along with straight foward honesty as displayed by a child. A lost yesterday echoing a present pain.
((((emystar))))
Ben |
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