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I sit alone
Contributed by
spookshowbaby
on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 03:19:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I sit alone feeling sorry for myself Wondering where I went wrong My life should have been something else Had so many dreams that didnt come true The only thing Ive got leftis you
I feel the tears welling in my eyes Fighting off the feelings I hold deep inside I dont know where Im going Or what I could have been Why dont things ever go to plan?
I wish I could change my life I wish I could turn everything around But every time things start to look up They always fall back down
You make all the pain go away You make me want to stay I know I couldnt leave you behind Youre the only thing that makes my life worthwhile
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Re: I sit alone
(User Rating: 1 ) by Sinned on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 05:50:47 AM AEST (User
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Spookshowbaby
Welcome to YPDC.
Dreams are dreams and thats okey.
Don't we all wish for a better day.
Your poem was average,but I hope you post more.
You have a friend on Americas shore.
Sinned
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Re: I sit alone
(User Rating: 1 ) by mylastwords on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 07:39:16 AM AEST (User
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Hey,
I really like this, I can relate so well! You say what I used to feel! Keep you head up! Life is a rollercoaster, you just gotta ride it!
xxooxx mylastwords xxooxx
ps: thanks for commenting on one of my poems! |
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