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BOOM!
Contributed by
jyssvw22
on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 11:21:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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A Name Change
Is needed
A new identity
Something,
Unique
Back to my roots
Of which
I never speak
Ashamed of
Who I used to be
Trying to
Escape
This catastrophe
That is
An inherited reality
My future
No longer
Ahead of me
A monster headache
Serves up
Reminders of bliss
A heartbeat
Cant resist
Boom!
Gone in a flash
The memory
Has just now
Passed
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jyssvw22
... [
2005-05-27 11:21:57]
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Re: BOOM!
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by DorianChambers on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 11:36:19 AM AEST
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A poetic make over wonderful concept nice
write . . .
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Re: BOOM!
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by Silent-No-More on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 01:33:17 PM AEST
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Wow. I like this. This is as if you captured a thought as it crossed your mind and slapped it on the page. I like the brevity of the lines.... it adds something.... forcing the reader's mind to turn this over as it goes and begging them back for a re-read.
Nicely done,
~Snemmy~
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