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Fly
Contributed by
Versigh
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Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 02:49:32 PM in AEST
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oops
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The fly is suffering
watch it spin
just laying on it's wings it's feet in the air
Twitching... funny because it got zapped by that bright light that everyone talks about
Now it's just laying there waiting to die.
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Versigh
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2005-05-27 14:49:32]
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Re: Fly
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by Fears on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 10:15:00 PM AEST
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that i quite interesting! Very different!
keep posting because i like your work!
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Re: Fly
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by chadrawlings on
Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 11:36:20 PM AEST
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| This poem brought back a memory of me being in so much trouble one time i was grounded to the point that the only thing i had to do was catch flys by my window seal and take my frustration with life out on them by pulling off their wings and "grounding" them as well. |
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