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As Good For You?
Contributed by
blackmarker
on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 03:46:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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I felt it.
that night.
her fear.
pain.
desperation.
heart-break.
so loudly.
echoes.
in dark.
I feel it.
it hurts.
so much.
so strong.
pulse racing.
heart beats.
quick.
quicker.
quickest.
so fast.
wont stop.
cant.
s. l. o. w. d o w n.
now tears.
so hot.
they sting
like ice.
why doesnt it end?
why wont he stop?
please.
it hurts.
Just stop it!
Stop!
Youre hurting her!
no more.
please.
please?!
youre ruining her life.
cant you see?
what youre doing to her?
fire.
in your eyes.
while she crumbles like pottery.
shes torn now.
because of you.
bleeding.
but you wont stop.
You. Just. Keep. Going.
on and on.
til your release.
feel it there?
in the pit of your belly?
building.
from your toes.
tingling.
to your knees.
up.
up.
up.
more. more. more.
til you burst
with a sigh.
and one last whimper
from the girl you destroyed.
I saw it!
I feel it!
shes hurting.
shes hurting.
and all you say is
was it good for you?
Okay.
This is based on a nightmare I had.
But feel free to perceive it however you will.
Copyright ©
blackmarker
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2005-05-27 15:46:09]
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Re: As Good For You?
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 05:12:11 PM AEST
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This was really good, and I'm glad it was just a nightmare...! Very well-written.
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