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We are like family now.
Contributed by
Giggles1989
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Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 07:34:35 AM in AEST
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We are all friends no matter what happens, where we go or whatever we may do in life. . .
No matter what we will always love each other and will be together. . .
I love you all because you have been by me no matter what in the good times and in the really bad times that have happened this year and I appreciate it with all my heart. . .
Amy, Your my best friend, sis, and a great shoulder to cry on no matter what. I know this year and when Matt died we both had a really hard time, but now we have are guys that love us dearly and they want us to be happy. I know that if we have any troubles in our lives then they will help us through it and I will help you also becuase I love you and your a great sister always watching out for me and Jeremy and all your other friends.
this is for Jeremy, I want to be with you forever and ever. You are a great person. I know that IF we ever break up that we can be friends atleast, but I dont think that will happen, but if it does it wont happen for a while. . .
Justin, I want you to know that your like a big brother to me now and my sis (Amy) really loves you and wishes that she could be with you so bad. I know when she is old enough she is going to marry you.
Amanda, no matter what has happened between us before that is all behind us and now your a sister to me too. I love you sis and no matter what may happen this wednesday then can never really take you away from me ever.
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Re: We are like family now.
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by Sinned on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 07:53:34 AM AEST
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Giggles1989
Hi Giggles
What you wrote I can see you took your time.
I will tell you grl it came out fine.
If you donot mind ?
It would read much smoother if you used a little more ryme.
Giggles it doesn't have to ryme each and every line.
This is a very nice tribute to your sister and friends
I hope you keep on writting again and again.
I enjoy your poems
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Re: We are like family now.
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by OnAngelswings on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 08:10:52 AM AEST
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| Straight from the heart...A very loving tribute to family and friends...I enjoyed it alot....Shari :) |
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Re: We are like family now.
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by hellsfallenangel on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 08:37:33 AM AEST
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i love it and i love u very much well ttyl love u lots bye
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Re: We are like family now.
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by Baby_Grl on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 12:05:26 AM AEST
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You were right it is very long sis. But that was very sweet and I lovve you so much sis. Thank you for that write. And I Really do love Justin, I just hope he'll never break my heart again. Nice write sis. good write...write more. your really good dont listen to that one person saying u need rymes, as long as its good and got your feelings out thats fine. Thats wat makes a good write...it dont have to be perfect perfect because nothing is perfect so good job sis and remember Im always here for you and you know I will always be there for any one. I love you sis and thank you ye.
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