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Flirting with Suicide
Contributed by
living_dead_girl
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Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 10:19:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Fliting with suicide
Lingering on the edge of death
Living such a cold life
No way out
Don't pull me through
Don't save my life
Just let me die
I'll be better off
Just leave me here
So I can go in peace
No tears
No fears
Just me
Flirting with suicide
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2005-05-28 10:19:27]
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Re: Flirting with Suicide
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by marshmalloska on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 04:23:04 PM AEST
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| A sad and moving poem. Id offer sympathy or a listening ear, but i wouldnt want to patronise you. Good write |
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Re: Flirting with Suicide
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by nabokovfan87 on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 05:29:10 PM AEST
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nice write i often do the same thing most of my poems have the same type of eerieness to them. this write seemed week to me it has the words and the meaning but i feel it can be a lot stronger. the next time you decide to doodle about something liek this try to tap into exactly that moment instead of just making it so general. sometimes it can be hard but if u pull it off you will defenitely see the difference.
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Re: Flirting with Suicide
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by bethers_is_my_baby on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 02:12:08 PM AEST
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| great job! keep up the good work! :) |
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Re: Flirting with Suicide
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by hellsfallenangel on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 08:24:51 AM AEST
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its good but u got to think what everyone else will go through bye
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