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Thoughts on Love
Contributed by
sride686
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Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 10:41:04 AM in AEST
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I feel your soft kiss
As it caress my lips
And Im lost in your eyes
With a love such as this
You hold me tight
As my fears drift away
And my life full of shame
Is lost in loves game
Your words and your voice
They drive me insane
As the lust of your voice
Whispers out my sweet name
When your lost in these moments
Youll let your love soar
It will set your heart free
For its a love you adore
I write of our love
That will never part
And I hope you have comfort
When were so fare apart
For when I return
Are love will go on
With a love in our hearts
That will always grow strong
Now my thoughts go out
To inter your mind
With my words full of love
That are found in this rime
Now I say good bye
But we never will part
For I know that forever
Youll live in my heart
~Steve~
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Re: Thoughts on Love
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by Vampirequeen on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 11:07:23 AM AEST
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awww that is so beautiful
I love this kind of poems .
awsome job |
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Re: Thoughts on Love
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by DorianChambers on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 11:14:56 AM AEST
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Beautiful steve nice feelings go with this . . .
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Re: Thoughts on Love
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by SweetRhythm on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 12:21:54 PM AEST
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Awh whoa, spechless, lost for words, blown away. That was truly remarkable.
You sure have talent & should definatly hang on to your girl as she certainly gives you plenty of inspiration & that write was utterly delightful & very warming to the soul.
5/5
Thanks for sharing
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Re: Thoughts on Love
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 12:58:23 PM AEST
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Well done...Bravo! This was a very sweet poem and I enjoyed reading it.
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Re: Thoughts on Love
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by MorningDove on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 04:33:56 PM AEST
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Blessings to you both,
Rita |
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