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Dear Shakespeare (A Letter To The Lost Relationship)
Contributed by
abnormalpunk
on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 02:55:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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you ruined my life
thank you
i never wanted to be in love
and now im not
because of you
you took her away
with your words so smooth
woo her into solitude
away from her friends
away from her family
away from me
how do you do it?
how do you make it so easy
so destroy ones love
and come out loved?
tell me your secret
to ruining a relationship
oh...
so thats it
thank you for destroying my life
could you hand me your gun now?
i'd like to finish what you started
Copyright ©
abnormalpunk
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2005-05-28 14:55:07]
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Re: Dear Shakespeare (A Letter To The Lost Relationship)
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 02:59:03 PM AEST
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| Well... dang! If you get me feeling like I want to give you advice or something, then obviously the writing is skilled enough that your emotions showed through. I want to say... but...but... we have more choices than we choose to be aware of at any point in time. (Slaps self - stop giving advice.) Okay. um. This was a good write. J. |
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Re: Dear Shakespeare (A Letter To The Lost Relationship)
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by MorningDove on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 03:44:16 PM AEST
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Splendid poem. Powerfully worded emotions. Put it all into perspective and you will be fine. Walk forward and stop looking back and eventually you will reach where you truly want to be. Good luck.
Smiles,
Rita |
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Re: Dear Shakespeare (A Letter To The Lost Relationship)
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by mindset on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 02:51:15 PM AEST
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love a desire only we make shall we again make the same mistake or look within eyes and see and know true love
to understand and know the flow and one will go |
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