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Is This... It?
Contributed by
abnormalpunk
on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 02:59:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
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the end has arrived
and i'm stuck here
right in the middle of it
where do i go from here
when there is only one way
to choose from
if this is all i have
what am i longing for
when i have let go of everything
i went where i wanted
and ended up here
right back at the place i started
i stand here staring
at you standing there and staring
at the brick wall between us
my hands are scarred
with memories of then
and stained with words i said
perverse fun
dies in the morning
at the birth of your regret
life equals waste.
is that what you wanted
when you accomplished your goals
underneath it all
you uncover yourself
just to find your next layer bolted shut
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abnormalpunk
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2005-05-28 14:59:56]
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Re: Is This... It?
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by MorningDove on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 03:37:56 PM AEST
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We all have free will. If you are unhappy with your life then change it. No one can but you. Always remember that and wrongs can be righted no matter what anyone says.
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Re: Is This... It?
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 03:43:05 PM AEST
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This is good...Like when you take one step forward and two steps back...Well done.
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Re: Is This... It?
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by russ-dawg on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 01:58:30 AM AEST
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| WOW................powerful! loved it. |
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Re: Is This... It?
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by deepviolet on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 12:41:31 PM AEST
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| everything always comes to a standstill every once in a while. things will work out :). by the way i like the poem, it is very expressive. |
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