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Simple Case of Mathamatics
Contributed by
jyssvw22
on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 07:57:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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A figment of my imagination
The heat residue
Builds up forcefully
Isolated tumors
Causing the blindness
The epidemic outbreak
Has begun to takeover...
The reality that stares you in the face
Speaks to you
And warns you
Of what will assuredly take place
Treat yourself kindly
And you can be saved
The adventure
Of a life-time
The adrenalin is
The drug we crave
First kisses and heartfelt wishes
Candle light picnics
What a romantic-
What a fanatic
No one can breathe the dirty air
All of us are
Asthmatics
Its a simple case of mathamatics
When the looser wins the race
And the cake is eaten too
The devilish smile which graces
The next three miles
Your running shoes
Seem to be glued
To the ground you,
You are planted
To the sound
Your ear, stretches
The harmony that is found
In the pages,
Of the classics
The writers of the ages
And the composers
And the artists
While your sculptured face
Begins to rust
The restoration
Of the temple
The leader always leads
By example...
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jyssvw22
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2005-05-28 19:57:17]
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Re: Simple Case of Mathamatics
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 10:37:19 PM AEST
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Wow Jyss, this is another good write...It really spoke to me. Keep up the awesome work.
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Re: Simple Case of Mathamatics
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by Silent-No-More on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 11:40:32 PM AEST
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*applauds wildly*
Eeeesh - this is excellent! and how incredibly I envy you it! I spent a fair amount of time on this page... reading, re-reading, reading aloud... and I couldn't more thrilled for having discovered this. There is so much here that I'm impressed with... not the least of which is the fact that you didn't hand it to us entirely. (The 'general poetry' category seems, then, both perfect and entirely inadequate here.)
Fabulous write! I couldn't adequately describe how this captured my attention no matter how long I rambled on in an attempt to do as much.
Enjoying this immensely,
~Snemmy~ |
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