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Flirting With Disaster
Contributed by
hauntedscorp
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Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 08:17:32 PM in AEST
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Out of all the random things to do....
can't figure out why I said that to you
I had it, I felt it, I reached it, I clasped it
Why must I speak of things not to be spoken? (It was dumb I must admit...)
screws loose, creaking door,here I am; it's me you abhor
Tongue ripped out---NEVER AGAIN---spewing another outpour
feeling things ridiculous, is craziest at best
I hate it; but when I feel something I have to get it off my chest
Why are you so worried? I'm a million miles away!
Can't say more than I'm sorry...that's all I have to say.
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Re: Flirting With Disaster
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by shelby on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 08:35:58 PM AEST
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great expression and yes we have all done this better foot in our mouth than up our mmm u know the rest of that story cheer up my friend a heartfelt Im sory should be all it takes
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Re: Flirting With Disaster
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by MorningDove on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 08:38:17 PM AEST
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I seem to suffer from this severe chronic condition so don't feel alone and don't feel bad too long. A sincere apology should suffice and if it does not, then it wasn't anything to worry about in the first place for you were probably right.
Rita |
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Re: Flirting With Disaster
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by emystar on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 08:50:10 PM AEST
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nay can't say I ever wanted my foot in my mouth but I know it's ended up there many times.
Good writing.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Flirting With Disaster
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by DorianChambers on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 08:50:48 PM AEST
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Short, sweet, very effective, straight from the
heart, did i leave anything out? oh, a most
beautiful peice of writting . . .
Ben
aka.Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Flirting With Disaster
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by jyssvw22 on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 11:16:43 PM AEST
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hey scorp dont be so hard on yourself, we all do it, and sometimes we think we did it, but we really didnt and no one even notices...
nice write
keep up the good work
i love the new style |
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Re: Flirting With Disaster
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 12:40:16 AM AEST
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| I'd forgive you... :-) |
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Re: Flirting With Disaster
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 08:14:53 AM AEST
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Oh yeah...I looooove toe jam. ;-}
Scorp, you have a lovely way of piecing words together. Just love it to death!
Keep it up. |
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Re: Flirting With Disaster
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by eternityandaday4u on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 11:40:48 AM AEST
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| aww don't worry it happens to the best of us... you can't help it.. whats done is done and whats said is said so put it to rest... you said sorry and that should be enough if not i wouldn't worry too much don't beat yourself up for it... any way nice write... always smile eternity |
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Re: Flirting With Disaster
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by i_heart_herby on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 05:50:00 PM AEST
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| this heartfelt....truly beautiful... |
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Re: Flirting With Disaster
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by helianthus on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 11:26:24 AM AEST
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| L-O-V-E this. I'll be watching you. You have a new critic. Thanks for sharing... |
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Re: Flirting With Disaster
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Sunday, 23rd November 2014 @ 07:59:07 PM AEST
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| I am often trying to pull the foot OUT of my mouth, lol. but I have only recently started saying what I truly felt and it is often met with disdain. |
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Re: Flirting With Disaster
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 10th February 2015 @ 12:23:13 AM AEST
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In answer to your author's note..... Noooooooo I do it all the time without choosing to do so.
I went to randomly pick another and I find another with a title shared by a Molly Hatchet song. So I chose to read it and boo...sad. :( I don't mean boo at the poem. I like the poem. Just sorry I drew a sad time from your past. But hey, that's us poets, is it not?
A million miles, a few miles, the heart knows no limits.
Random thought: Aren't you supposed to use kilometers? :P
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