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Too Many Times
Contributed by
Jaycee
on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 08:44:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Too many times I could not cope
Too many times I just lost hope
Too many times I'd sit back and mope
Too many times I did not see
Lacking in faith I did not believe
No trust in me I could not achieve
Going on a date I could not conceive
Too many times I wouldn't be me
So many times I ran away
So many times I cried not today
So many times my feelings I'd slay
Too many times from life I did flee
Joining the workforce was full of pain
Interacting with others drive me insane
Trying to understand gave me a migraine
Too many times I lived inadequately
In recent times I'd speak the final goodbye
In recent times I got ready to die
In recent times I reached for an ally
Too many times my soul was droopy
Locating solutions was hard to find
Looking for others when I was so blind
Wanting good company I did not mind
Too many times I was too dizzy
Having found YPDC was worth the wait
Having friends like Jennie* and Kara** is really great
Having confidence is really first rate
Now in these times I live happily
* and Jenni et al
** and Kylie et al
Copyright ©
Jaycee
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2005-05-28 20:44:04]
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Re: Too Many Times
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by MorningDove on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 08:49:46 PM AEST
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| I think this is a splendid coming out of yourself poem. We all have a certain lack of faith in ourselves and writing, whether it be poetry or stories or even just a diary gives us a place to put those feelings until we are strong enough to come back and look at them and deal with them. This site and many others have helped so many people. Personally, this site is MY favorite but to each his own. This is a great great poem. I hope others recognize what you are saying here and how it and people helped you. Rita |
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Re: Too Many Times
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by emystar on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 09:12:00 PM AEST
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Very good write.
Jenni-n-I have been friends for at least five years, now.
Very fine tribute.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Too Many Times
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 09:18:30 PM AEST
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Just keep looking ahead, Jaycee....no turning back!!
This is priceless!!
I'm sorry I haven't been on site lately but will catch up with my comments soon..I promise...
Hugs
Crazy One....
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Re: Too Many Times
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by blue_angel on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 09:20:54 PM AEST
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thats pretty cool i like it. has good rhythm and message. great job JC!
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Re: Too Many Times
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by sprinter27 on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 09:35:56 PM AEST
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awesome poem, jaycee. i'm glad you've got friends that can help you not want to die. I wish i could do that for others and/or myself. i'm glad everything turned out ok for you. keep up the good work!!!
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