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Bleeding
Contributed by
living_dead_girl
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Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 08:46:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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She cuts deep to the source of her pain
Wondering if she's gone insane
As it all starts to die down
She falls to the ground
Bleeding from the inside out
Nothing does she think about
She doesn't know why this is wrong
She just needs something to help her stay strong
The bleeding stops
A new scar crops
The bleeding helps her through
Cause nothing else will do
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2005-05-28 20:46:42]
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Re: Bleeding
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by shelby on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 08:50:57 PM AEST
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very sad....... LDG is this you?? Its Michelle
sorry if Iv got the wrong one lol |
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Re: Bleeding
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by Fears on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 08:59:53 PM AEST
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wow, this is really sad but a very good write either way. This poem is a very hard thing to understand for some...( the real feelings) but to other like i and maybe you...it is a general part of our day...
Life changing poem...keep posting on the site pls!
~Fears |
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Re: Bleeding
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by poet70 on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 09:00:11 PM AEST
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| So, is this a poem about yourself or someone you know of? It is a sad thing that people really do have to feel they need to cut in order to deal with inner pain, I am sorry if you are the one who is the cutter, hope you can find help to stop, I wouldn't think you would want to continue on forever doing this if you are the one cutting, good write, emotional, sad, and worded to where the reader deffentily know what you are writing about, the pain, the depression, the hurts, and ect, good write. |
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Re: Bleeding
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by Ripper_Something_Unusual on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 09:25:42 PM AEST
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| This poem really rings true with me. Ive been where this is at and its not nice. All I can say to whomever this poem concerns. Just dont give up, it might sound cheesy but everyone has to face up to their demons. |
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Re: Bleeding
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by all_the_dead_roses on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 11:28:01 PM AEST
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| I've been there too and I remember thinking physical pain is better than emotinal pain, and to me it is but I stopped 3 years ago and I hope if it you, you are talking about than you will too. |
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Re: Bleeding
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by hellsfallenangel on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 08:28:41 AM AEST
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its good but u shouldnt cut tattoo are safer
DEMON |
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