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Tortured Memories
Contributed by
Makeshift_2134
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Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 10:33:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I thought of all that we could be.
All the things you couldnt see.
I felt love grow deep inside me.
Never thought youd ever love me.
Cant you see that were running out of time?
I am dying but I die inside.
Why did you make everything crash down?
Now my tears are falling down.
Loneliness is all I see.
Waiting for memories to stop haunting me
This isnt the way that it should be.
Ill wait the time, and I wont argue.
Sit with fallen tears, a picture of you
When I close my eyes, you are all I see.
Running for a new lifeone without me.
But you are all I got inside me.
This isnt the way that it should be.
I cant stop missing you, I cant deal with the pain.
All I have left is memories and their driving me insane.
After all this time, after all that weve been through.
Im completely stuckCant be with or without you
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Re: Tortured Memories
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by all_the_dead_roses on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 11:10:26 PM AEST
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hi I really loved your poem. Me and my boyfriend of 4 1/2 years broke up 2 months ago and still it hurts like it just happend yesterday, but now that we just graduated it might make it easier because I don't see him all of the time, but maybe if you hang ouut with your friends alot more or try dating someone else it might work. I wish you the best and I am so sorry for your heartbreak.
~Sara |
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Re: Tortured Memories
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by LostInLife on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 10:56:57 AM AEST
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| I went through the same exact hing and i still am. I can't get over her. |
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Re: Tortured Memories
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by Dorkfish on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 06:40:48 PM AEST
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| Awesome! That was a great poem. I'm very sorry. Atleast you achieved some great writing skills out of the whole mess. Great job! |
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