|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
dear whom it may concern
Contributed by
XXtragicxpoeticx3
on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 10:41:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
|
dear whom it may concern
last night god told me i had to die, but it couldnt be by the hand of that crazy escapee guy.he said it had to be by the hand of me. i didnt see how he could be saying this, i mean how could this be? so i took a knife from the kitchen drawr. stabbed it thru my heart, then hit the floor. i couldnt feel ne thing. i started to go numb. this is the last of my life but a better begining for some. the room turned black then all of a sudden there was a scream. it was her mother looking thru the window screen. the outside turned cold and the flowers in bloom turned grey. her mother begged and pleaded, "o please my daughter must stay!". just then her father walked thru the door. he had just got home from work and his head was soar. the man saw his daughter and then saw his wife. his face turned to a weird and awkward bright white. he didnt know wat to think as he picked the girl up. they rushed to the hospital but not soon enough. the girl had died in her mothers arms in their dark red chevy. out of nowhere the clouds got really dark and heavy. it started ro rain and the day turned to night. they never made it to the hospital, they were in too much fright. they couldnt imagine why the girl had done this at all. but they did know one thing, the girl was gone and had marks from her lifelong fall. right then out of the blue. an angel showed up and said its my turn now there is no more need for u. the girls soul reached out of her body and into the circle of light. she was with all the beautiful angels and was now dressed not dark, but bright. the funeral was dreadful it felt as if her spirit were there. her boyfriend showed up to advertise how much he really did care. the girls life is gone, and lost forever. this was her story as well as suicide letter.
Copyright ©
XXtragicxpoeticx3
... [
2005-05-28 22:41:19]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: dear whom it may concern
(User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 11:18:03 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Well, to whom it may concern, you can rest assured it was not her God talking to her.
Rita |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
