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After the Storm
Contributed by
ravens_death
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Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 10:45:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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A black cloud hoovers over sky
Alias annonymous
It follows me
Never letting go
It dances overhead
Beating down on my soul
The thundering increases now
The noise is so mind nubming
Rumbles and shakes
Scare me to my core
Made of my darkest thoughts
Still I long for more
I will overcome
and I wont succumb
...and it smells like victory
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Re: After the Storm
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by MorningDove on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 11:15:57 PM AEST
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And victory it shall be. It is so good to hear someone say they can overcome their demons. We all can. we just have to want to and try hard enough to do it. Great poem.
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Re: After the Storm
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by Tanmaya on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 02:26:33 AM AEST
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This is well-written, I liked the last two lines.
Needs some refinement... but overall, a good write.
Keep writing... |
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