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Trip to the beach
Contributed by
somedaylove
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Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 12:41:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
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The moon reflecting on the waters
So pure and clear
Its like the first time
I stared into your eyes
The sweet smell all around
Filling the air
Brings back memories
Of my nose in your hair
The breeze flowing
Across the water
Wraps my body
Like a great big hug
The spray of the water
Upon my body
Feels like you hands
Caressing me
All the sounds of nature
That I hear so clear
Are just like your voice
Saying I Love You
The mist on my lips
So moist and clean
Reminds me of a
Hot wet kiss
The sands of the beach
Forms all around me
Like our two bodies
Fit one to another
The waves gently
Crashing into the shore
Is like the sounds of
Our bodies coming together
In times when we must be apart
Take a trip to the beach
For there you will see
Together we will always be
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somedaylove
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2005-05-29 00:41:36]
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Re: Trip to the beach
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 12:46:15 AM AEST
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| Awwww....The beautiful feeling of being in love... |
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Re: Trip to the beach
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by emystar on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 12:46:28 AM AEST
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Very good write. Reminds me of my own sweet luv.
Awesome.
huggs,
emy
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Re: Trip to the beach
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by crazygirl on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 12:51:43 AM AEST
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love is truly amazing and so is this poem
if u wrote this about a certain someone i really hope they got to see it to;its truly beautiful |
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Re: Trip to the beach
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by MorningDove on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 01:36:58 AM AEST
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This is truly a lovely write. Memories help sustain us in times of depression, fear, and/or loss. Isn't it amazing how sights, sounds and aromas can bring back certain happy times (and sad) in our lives. I will certainly be watching for more or your work.
Smiles,
Rita |
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Re: Trip to the beach
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 07:44:27 AM AEST
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Aww this was such a sweet loving poem. So full love and adoration to that special someone.
Kudos on a great write.
Jane xx |
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Re: Trip to the beach
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by DorianChambers on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 11:01:20 PM AEST
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i love this poem i love the sea any way now i
love the poem even more u write with
brightness a nice feeling i got from this . . .
Benedetto John Papa |
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Re: Trip to the beach
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 02:45:34 PM AEST
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lovingly enchanting, beautifully written, hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: Trip to the beach
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 01:32:57 PM AEST
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| very romantic. Makes me want to go to the beach and think of the one for me. Good write. hope yall can be together again. |
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