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When did we fall?
Contributed by
BrwnEyedGirl7
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Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 01:16:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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When you walked away
I forgot you had a rope of obsession tied to me
I couldn't leave you alone
I wanted to be with you
So hang & hand I went along with you
and you went along with me
Blindfolded by the future
The past was all we could see
Times we feel it was hard to get back up
People trying to guide us in the wrong durection
But that wasn't enough
I looked back the other day
And that road of us seems pretty long
Now I notice where we are
It looks like a deep hole
I'm trying to think of when we fell in
When we saw it titled 'Love'
and where'd it all begin?
I'm not sure when it happened
I guess you could say cupid gave us a shove.
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Re: When did we fall?
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by wizard on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 02:10:46 AM AEST
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great poem. an excellent tale of falling in...
looking forward to reading more of your work
wizard
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