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Forever
Contributed by
TheKid
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Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 06:28:46 PM in AEST
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They did not agree on much
But their love was warmer than the gentlest touch
They struggled all the time testing each other everyday
But their love was still far from disarray
Because despite all their major differences; they formed a similarity
Their love was full of sincerity
No lies
Or awful cries
No temptations
Or bitter frustrations
No deceits
Or unjust mistreats
They were best friends
The perfect blend
They experienced doubts the world brought together
But one thing they were sure of, their love would last forever
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Re: Forever
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by poet70 on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 07:24:28 PM AEST
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I applaud you Thekid, this was a great write, I liked it allot, very well worded and laid out, thank you so much for posting it.
Tammi
keep on writing, sharing,I sure enjoyed |
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Re: Forever
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by jeza on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 07:26:20 PM AEST
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beautiful & magestic
this is an excellent write
keep it up
huggs
Jeza |
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Re: Forever
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 07:41:40 PM AEST
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| How very pretty, and good for you! Nice write. Keep it up.... Scorp. |
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Re: Forever
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by Mikayla on
Sunday, 4th September 2005 @ 11:44:23 AM AEST
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| You continue to impress me with your heart touching poetry! Wonderful flow for the writing part. Well done! :) |
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