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Brand New Sensation
Contributed by
jyssvw22
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Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 08:36:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Ladies and Gentlemen
Featuring the introduction of a brand new sensation
Yup, thats right, sweeping the nation, and although your first inclination
Would be to embrace your destination, and allow the subliminal to take you...
The intentional venue, set on the outskirts of the old city, the stage sits so picture pretty
The daylight thrives on the crowds energy, the moonlight bows to the greater authority
Cant compromise on the values I despise
Wont be a partner to these generic lies
A first explosion can be seen, a fury of fireworks soaks up the scenes
The intensity of the glow radiates in the shadow
While the river red flows ever so narrow
Where the lonesome dove, meets the recently widowed sparrow
Rests a sphere so hollow, it feels no sorrow
And can envision no tomorrow
Yet its ephemerally form, so brief but cyclical
Never permanently cut from its umbilical
Always seen as wildly astronomical
The cost of free honesty
Is not expressed, numerical
Rather, the sweetness, of honey
Can be interpreted, as theoretical
I may seem impractical, or unreasonable
However, I assure you I am sensible
With a flare for the theatrical
Without the glare
I can reflect the impossible
Cant compromise on the values I despise
Wont be a partner to these generic lies
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Re: Brand New Sensation
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 09:19:09 PM AEST
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*stands up and applauds the performance*
Wonderful! Wonderful!! Everyone has to compromise sometimes...What a shame, you should really give it a try. Have I told you I love that you're expanding my English Lit??
Theatrical indeed. Way to go jyss!!
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Re: Brand New Sensation
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 01:14:50 AM AEST
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I could just picture you upon a stage reading or reciting this literany! I could also sense the crowd waiting, waiting, for the wonderful ending! Bravo! I yell real loud.......this man your applause........wasn't that sensational or what?
You have a wonderful way of taking me wherever you write.......it was a brand new sensation for me too! Do it again and again...this was a great write
Warm Love
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