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“Hopeless”
Contributed by
andSHEbled__xx
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Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 08:46:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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And I know what it means to have someone care
Tell you they love you, theyll always be there
When your nothingness feels so real
And one persons words truly can heal
The walls youve built crumble to dust
You finally found someone to make you trust
The outsiders no longer matter
And you see the real you fall and shatter
You needed others to measure your worth
Now your true essence is lost to the earth
All you have left is empty embraces
Stagnant devotion, desolate faces
Love has lost its tender touch
The beauty died when you cared too much
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2005-05-29 20:46:09]
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Re: “Hopeless”
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by sicknivesevered on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 08:52:50 PM AEST
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| Excellent work. Its written very well. (^_^)b |
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Re: “Hopeless”
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by midnightwriter on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 09:33:15 PM AEST
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| well said |
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