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Last Time
Contributed by
sprinter27
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Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 09:20:39 PM in AEST
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This is the last time
Im really sick of your lying
You must think you can lie
And make me cry
Is that right to you?
Is it fair that I stayed true?
While you walked away?
I feel so betrayed
You left me alone
To fight on my own
You have left me, Im sick of it
You ripped us apart, bit-by-bit
I trusted you
Why do you do what you do?
I dont get you at all
But, hey, you let me fall
And I dont like that
People say not to fret
But, yeah, right, I shouldnt listen
Cause youve forgotten
Me yet again
Left me to fight this pain
Im tired of you; I dont want to see you
But you dont care and dont want to
Help me in any way
Just left me that day
Well that was the last time
I dont want to hear you lie
Any more
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Re: Last Time
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 09:44:51 PM AEST
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This is really good!! What are you talking about---you seem to write just fine to me. The flow, the wording....well done.
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Re: Last Time
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by Mild_Tempest on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 09:47:00 PM AEST
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| Nice ryhme and beat. Very heartfelt and understanding. I loved it. Keep writing. |
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